good try??

Quietly settling down, sat on my palm... a snowflake. A different one. One i'll never see again. The most beautiful creation of nature. I longed for more. but warmth makes a snowflake melt. Now only in my mind forever, when it was theremy life spiraled out of my surroundings into this little joy and satisfaction. I sat and i stared. I looked away and it was gone.
And the snowflake died.

As I stand on this path,
that severs my life.
a life of happiness,
from a life of truth,
I look back
a reminiscence of all
I have been through.
They say a person's life
flashes in front of their eyes
as their life comes to an end.
Many such ends I have gone throug
Yet this one, I want not.
Another life is yet to come
or maybe, many more.
But i'd forever die,
Coz the flashes I know...
... Will never stop

A poem i wrote a while back. Please let me know what interpretation you draw out of it. Mine nobody can fathom, and nobody will ever know. So as a request please don't ask me. But it could mean so many things to so many ppl. I would love to know in how many ways my words can be looked at. Because i've somehow always been through situations where, i say something and ppl hear something else.

Life is such a crazy roller coaster ride. And i want to get down saying "Whew!!! what a ride!!!"

Albert Trew or Albert Loys

A story once said, and left unsaid,
A feeling thinks of ploys.
We were told of the words
Of the baby blue,
The Thakurs and their joys.

Albert Trew or Albert Loys,
It’s left for you to decide.
Who’s the father? What’s the ploy?
In words should you confide?

The mother of the sinful child,
Had wept in tears and cried.
These tears I was told
Is the maiden cause,
For the love of the widowed bride.

Albert Trew or Albert Loys,
It’s left for you to decide.
See its eyes and read its heart,
A child is free of pride.

I’m the father, of that child,
I believe its heart is true.
The cry of the child,
Cannot be false,
It’s the cradle that I drew.

Albert Trew or Albert Loys,
It’s left for you to decide.
I know my heart and my child,
My child has almost died.

Srikanth.J
11-11-2005
02:07 hours